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beautiful Stef - the story
Contributed by
Arty_Sydney
on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She was the perfect kinda girl
i couldnt take my eyes off her
she gave me a compliment i didn't accept
she called and talked, i was in another world
she sent me to the newsagent
and there i found
was a little card
saying i love you with a smile
why didnt i tell her how i really felt?
this reaction is now causing me to melt
she wrote me letters
how cute of her
she called me from school camp
how perfect of her
it was then my last chance to tell her so
i didnt
she cried
then had to go
time passed she lost interest, and moved on
i think shes now forgotten me
why did i act so dumb?
now that shes somewhere not thinking about me
i still cant get her out of my mind
i hope to see her one more time
to tell her shes amazing
what i didnt last time
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Re: beautiful Stef - the story
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by philly on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 01:20:53 AM AEST
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| be more descriptive... go in detail about how you feel and about how much you like this girl. Think and feel before you put the words down. This is only the start you can improve very much. |
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Re: beautiful Stef - the story
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 10:07:04 AM AEST
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| I hope you told her how you feel by now ... I know what you mean about putting your thoughts down on paper and not wanting to change them afterwards because then it seems to change the way it truly was. Good write ... Jan |
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Re: beautiful Stef - the story
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by Arty_Sydney on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 02:24:39 PM AEST
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| thanks, these series of events happened when the perfect girl was in love with me, i just wanted to get it down on paper i guess you could say its more of a journal? |
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