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the front line
Contributed by
bttrflynajar
on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:34:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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im standing on the front line
ina war between love and hate
im being twisted and torn
between death and fate
every inch of my soul forlorn
my heart holds gashes
my eyes are cold
too many lashes
grown too bold
tried to raise my heart up high
to keep it from being shattered
but still these tears i cry
because nothing i ever did mattered
excruciating pain spreads through my viens
flowing in my blood directly from my heart turning black
a disease i cant stop, but only bury my remains
my advice: trust your heart before you hear it crack
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Re: the front line
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by Live2Die on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 06:15:12 PM AEST
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| And another truly amazing poem. I think I'm addicted to your writing. |
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Re: the front line
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by DannerSwa on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:00:11 AM AEST
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| Wow! Good job. You deserve a needed pat on the back! |
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Re: the front line
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by Channing on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 12:15:21 AM AEST
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| Very good and true poem, great write! |
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