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Another Year Comes
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 12:19:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Watching the rain as it streams down our windows
The clouds plumb and heavy and bursting at the seams
These quiet gentle showers
come around
to water the parched thirsty ground
Long time dry
sucked of its mositure
by winters harsh reign.
Its' the beginning of Spring
The grey skies opens up and spills out its tears
Quenching this lands thirst.
Flowers and new life will soon sprout forth
An other year of trying.
As our earth struggles with it grass and flowers ,trees and farms.
The earth we take for granted
is so obviously fading
Yet still it matters not .
It just keeps putting
everything we have grown
accustomed too
back.
The best it can
The insect and animal
Preparing for the new prangs of spring
Inside many a burrow, hollow and dirt dug out and Spring
No legged, Two legged, Four legged, Eight legged or Ten
A newly born form of lifes greatest Wonders
will soon begin.
Fresh , Crisp,
Rejuvenated colors and scents of emerald green grasses ,
flowers and things
So Much New Life
Prepared to give it all there is
for yet
another year.
Each Appear renewed all ready to begin again
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2005-04-30 12:19:01]
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Re: Another Year Comes
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by mylady on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:08:49 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. nice to see the rain. |
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Re: Another Year Comes
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:21:49 AM AEST
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beautifully written with great images:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Another Year Comes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 04:06:15 PM AEST
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ahhhhh and I breathe a gentle sigh.....
Wonderful write of Spring....just wonderful! |
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Re: Another Year Comes
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:27:01 AM AEST
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| You my dear have caught in this poem the eternal something that we humans cannnot fathom The continuity of life. Top marks from bernard. |
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Re: Another Year Comes
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:50:13 PM AEST
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| Your imagery is very inspiring. They to me draw allusions to life and it's trials. There is a close relation to spring and the renewal of the heart |
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