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Don't buy me a rose.
Contributed by
mylady
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Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 07:59:31 AM in AEST
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Don’t buy me a rose.
Buy me a rosebush.
Planted in the ground.
So are love will grow.
Every rose that grow .
You love me more.
If you leave.
My rose bush will stay.
Leaving a memory of the love we had.
Time have pass still the rose bush is there.
Bring a smile of the moment we had.
Copyright ©
mylady
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2005-04-30 07:59:31]
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Re: Don't buy me a rose.
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:10:32 AM AEST
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Mylady
Cute sweet,but that rose bush may also cause sadness of a love lost. I think you ment "our" instead of are in a line.typ-o
Write more :)
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Re: Don't buy me a rose.
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by Archie on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 04:21:03 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. Inspite of a few misspelled words this is an awesome poem. Great job and welcome to YPDC. |
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Re: Don't buy me a rose.
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:52:49 AM AEST
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| A good write and I look forward to many more of your pieces. Poetry is such a art and I love to see how people view their thoughts on paper. Take care and know you have friends here….Steve |
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Re: Don't buy me a rose.
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:02:22 AM AEST
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lovely expression, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: Don't buy me a rose.
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by remote on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 03:09:26 PM AEST
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| Very fresh, lovely. |
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