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Noone seems to care!
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:41:49 AM in AEST
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Noone seems to care for me.
And that I am dieing inside.
With all this pain I keep inside.
And what do I gain from this nothing but more pain.
I want to cry but I keep It locked Inside.
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2005-04-30 05:41:49]
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Re: Noone seems to care!
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:43:21 AM AEST
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| very short poem! but it was good! |
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Re: Noone seems to care!
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:27:22 AM AEST
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Butterflygirl40
Your getting better.This was short,but meaningful."People either like you or they don't"
If they don't....then thats their problem it doesn't mean your not nice or anything...I'm sure there are some people you don't really like and that is okey.Keep writing.
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Re: Noone seems to care!
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by In_a_while on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 01:38:05 PM AEST
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| A very sad but heartfelt poem. Draw from the emotions and be strong in your writing, writing is good medicine. good poem, and keep it up. |
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Re: Noone seems to care!
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:53:35 PM AEST
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| It was short, but it shows your deep emotions, I can relate to it also :) Jenny |
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Re: Noone seems to care!
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:46:56 PM AEST
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this was a very sad poem but good! but short
keep up the good work!:) |
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