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hiatus
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fixed
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Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:30:39 AM in AEST
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i'm going to take this hiatus tonight,
just allows myself to be set alight..
rhythm can be so enticing
and i want to dance
with somebody new
like
you
spirit with no boundary
my spiritual tuition,
living on impluse
choices through intuition
different from all of those
clingy, messed up wanderers...
our similarities
for time spent singular, and isolated
in sugar coated, precious isolation.
illusion does not deter you
i really think i prefer you....
decent and honest is rare at its best,
you are misleading but somehow a test,
when lost in dancing we're spinning through space
existence in stars, the universe our face..
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Re: hiatus
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by bttrflynajar on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 11:16:36 PM AEST
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| your words are descriptive and beautiful keep writing... i enjoy your poetry so much. |
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Re: hiatus
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 02:52:07 PM AEST
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Had to comment on this. I found it an interesting vision between the writer persona and the other person. But then I'm a sucker for relationship poems anyhow. :-)
Nice going! J. |
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