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lonely
Contributed by
aprilrose
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Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:29:31 AM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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You say you love me! I look into your eyes and see this is no lie!
Yet you ignore my existance. I am fading into the lonely core that swallows me with depression!
the emptyness of being ignored! I dont know how too stop this! I talk though i am not heard. I am fading
day by day until the day i completly fade will you even notice or wonder why? I dont know and i am praying that
one day you will hold me and fill my soul with the love you hold inside.
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Re: lonely
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:31:56 AM AEST
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very good write! i love this poem!
great job! |
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Re: lonely
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:50:22 AM AEST
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| well expressed, good job |
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Re: lonely
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 11:24:01 AM AEST
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Well done lovely writting very heartfelt . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: lonely
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by In_a_while on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 01:41:33 PM AEST
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| very strong writing, and full of emotions. I liked it a lot, especially "day by day until the day i completely fade"... how rhymeful and vivid! Keep up the good writing. |
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Re: lonely
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by bhavik on
Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 11:54:20 PM AEST
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| as real as it can get,you captured the feeling right. |
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