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The First Day
Contributed by
sharky
on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:23:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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Is that day again isn't it?
I hope you didn't forget...
A wonderful day indeed
Especially for you of course
And for people who cares
Today marked your presence on earth
Which you have no memory about
But never mind
We just glad you are here
So get on your feet
Venture from this day to more
Just like from the past till now
There will be many days to come
That you can keep them in your heart
The First Day
Happy Birthday
Copyright ©
sharky
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2005-04-30 05:23:42]
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Re: The First Day
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:48:03 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: The First Day
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by Archie on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:37:26 AM AEST
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| This is not bad for free verse. I bet the person you wrote it for is happy. |
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