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Can I love you?
Contributed by
Atari
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Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:15:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A smile spreads my face.
I want to hear your’ name!
I feel no shame because of this.
I can admit I missed you.
I’m glad to speak to you now.
I may have someone other than you now.
But they’ll be gone very soon.
I want you to know that I’m falling for you.
Why do you think I wait for you?
I’m so happy that I’m speaking with you.
I feel like I’m new.
New to love,
New to life,
New to all,
But it’s all because of you.
I want to thank you for this,
For this bliss that you allow me to have,
I will reminisce in all of this.
I don’t know if I should fall for you.
Can I feel the way I do?
I doubt you feel the same.
But I hope one day,
You’ll come to claim,
This love that I portray,
I want you to feel it like I do every day.
But yet I ask…Do you feel the same way?
Ariane Brooks
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Atari
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2005-04-30 02:15:58]
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Re: Can I love you?
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by mylady on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:09:20 AM AEST
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WOW! it so nice i understand the feeling like the part you say:
I feel like I’m new.
New to love,
New to life,
New to all,
But it’s all because of you.
It great ... |
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Re: Can I love you?
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by heartless_soul on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:50:37 AM AEST
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| this was heart felt and full of loving emotion. it shows that you truly love this person and will go through anything, just hope that your love will wait for. I wish that there would be someone out there like you for me. I would like to see other stuff from you later, (you do need to work on your flow and style alittle) but this was still good. Be well. |
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Re: Can I love you?
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by PoeticLicense on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:40:42 AM AEST
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I understood this before I read it, but now I'm not so sure.
It's not that it doesn't have a coherent theme, it's just that the theme isn't... coherent.
Forgive me for saying it, but this sounds like pure infatuation. |
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