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Just where the truth it lies
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
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There is a world
I have found
That lies inside your head
The only way
To find it there
Is through the dreams we’re fed
To us it’s only illusion
A fantasy from within
And I really don’t know
what to tell you
or where I should begin
Some rule that I have broken
Some crack I happened upon
Some secret slipped
Right past my sleep
As I watched again the dawn
It was there that I first saw it
A wonder to my surprise
It could not be
This I see
Right before my eyes
A shadow cast on the ages
To darken through out time
To blind our eyes
As not to see
Just where the truth it lies.
Copyright ©
wordsy
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2002-12-26 23:40:00]
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Re: Just where the truth it lies
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by juves_angel on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 10:16:35 AM AEST
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Hey,
That was a really neat poem at first I didn't get it because I'm a lil slow, (lol) but now I do and it's great!!! I wish I had the ability to write poems like that you truly have a gift =)
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Re: Just where the truth it lies
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 08:10:34 PM AEST
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| interesting...very enjoyable |
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Re: Just where the truth it lies
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by darkmind on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 02:55:11 PM AEST
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| i dont have dreams only nightmares and definatly live in the world in my head you are a really good poet this ones my favorite |
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