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Without Regret...
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 08:57:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Oh dear friend, I am afraid this is goodbye
The last time to feel pain, last time to cry
I have been fading slowly into the abyss
There is no way for me to evade this
The void between the world and me
They’re all so blind, none can see
I wish there was some way around it
But I’ve heard that in the end there’s darkness
And lately life has been on the black side
I’ve tried to run away, tried to flee and hide
But when I reflect, it all comes to one fixation
I can no longer live, I’ve no dedication
When I call out, there’s an emptiness that rings
My voice cracks when I try to sing
What I used to confide in no longer exists
And into temptation I fail to resist
Knife in hand, I burst out in laughter
I realize that it isn’t the scar, but the crafter
I made this life into what it is now
And it’s so clear, I know exactly how
And so with a smile on my face I will die
Laughing with a choke and a tear in my eye
Happy that I have reached a final solution
No longer do I have to create an illusion
This is the real thing, this is the end
And I’m happy to leave you, I regret not my friend
Copyright ©
blue_angel
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2005-04-29 20:57:38]
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Re: Without Regret...
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:04:20 PM AEST
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jennie!!! abosutely NOT!!! i feel like this all the time, too. But, no, we can't do it. we have to die alone TOGETHER! remember? remember all the laughs and good times. and the stupid things kc has done. you know, "you too". you canNOT leave me. you leave me, i leave too. that's how it works. you are one of my BEST friends. do NOT let go.
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Re: Without Regret...
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by Jaycee on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:05:36 PM AEST
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Wow, that is really a moving poem Jennie. After a few more positive poems, I'm sad to see this subject matter, but I understand that is your life. What can I say? That you have a talent that needs to be shared. Well, you know that. You need to live for you. You are so much better than the people who have mistreated you. I would hate to see them win. You deserve to be here and get what you can out of life. I've said it before, and I'll say it again. JENNIE, you rock!
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Re: Without Regret...
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:34:05 AM AEST
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Interesting write . The words you chose carried the reader along and it gave feelings of confusion and aching- haunting somehow.
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Re: Without Regret...
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 01:27:09 PM AEST
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| This was a awesome write that really drew me in, it had so much doubt and pain and emotion. In this poem there is so much in question that you can really see the struggle. I’ve felt this way my self from time to time just read my work and you’ll see that. I do know one thing I have to much pride to give up on something and then theirs also the thoughts of friends and family that you will effect. Plus I’ll never get to see anymore of these outstanding writes. But take care and know you have friends here. I’m in Iraq right now fighting for freedom of a country that’s not my own. Reading your work and your comments on mine are one of the things I look forward to each day. Take care and keep your head up and if you ever want to talk you can pm me or email me….Steve |
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Re: Without Regret...
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by RockRoss on
Saturday, 12th November 2011 @ 09:12:25 AM AEST
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You are really a good writer and you have a lot of talent...and I know it can be difficult but you have to find the reasons to carry on...there are many you just have to try to find the happiness in the little things...
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