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Life
Contributed by
tiger_grl
on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 05:58:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Insecurities and impurities...
Minds illness and obsession-
O.C.T and illusions,
The strive for perfection,
Minds imperfect judgementation-
Ill-equiped and disordered-
Sweat and teared,
Cry for the released grasp-
A task,
And no feat yet takin-
To complete and manipulate
These thoughts of disullsuion.
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tiger_grl
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2005-04-29 17:58:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 08:29:07 PM AEST (User
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I dont see nothing wrong with this
poem i think it is good!
Great writing! Good Job! |
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