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She is my creator
Contributed by
countrychck
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Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 04:29:56 PM in AEST
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She is the sweetest person that I know
I could never ask for someone greater
Everything about her makes you glow
I love her, for she is my creator
Of all the times that I stayed up and cried
She did her best to see me through the nights
Everything she taught me is locked inside
I'd never get lost, she's my guiding light.
Things she did will never be forgotten
From now to the very last breath I take
She is the one that spoiled me rotten
She is my mother, that is no mistake
She is the reason I am who I am
Without her I am nothing but a sham
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2005-04-29 16:29:56]
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Re: She is my creator
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 11:19:33 PM AEST
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| AWW! Such a sweet and beautiful sonnet you have here. Excellent for being the first poem you've ever written. |
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Re: She is my creator
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:49:16 AM AEST
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Countrychck
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This is beautiful a nice tribute to your mother although I do disagree as to her being your creator.
For your first poem--I wishI could write so well : )
Please post more I see you have much to offer.
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