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Simplicity
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Archie
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Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:14:35 PM in AEST
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I want nothing more than to be happy
but happiness just keeps eluding me
Even when I get the things I''ve wanted
Something keeps it''s joy from reaching me
Everyone around me seems so happy
They get just what they want and what they need
I wish it was the same for me, but it is not today
I wish my life had more simplicity
I''d give away all my money
just to have some peace of mind
Life to me seems very lonely
I have no friends to spend my time
I''d give my life up for some meaning
to end the toils of wasting time
to add to my eye a little gleening
and a reason not to cry
The more I try to reach that star
the further away it becomes
I would forget my life
just for a little joy
and simplicity
I took a look into the mirror
to see the man that I''ve become
A life adrift upon the river
A man whose life is so undone
I thought that maybe I should end it
but that is not the proper road
Somehow there must be some hope
a way to somehow cope
If I find smplicity
I''d give away all of my money
just to find some peace of mind
you can have all my posessions
let me have some happy times
A life that always sees the rainbow
even during drowning times
Somehow there must be some hope
a way to justly cope
If I had simplicity
No one
no one feels like me
it feeels like no one
no one feels like me
(Simplicity)
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Copyright ©
Archie
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2005-04-29 12:14:35]
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Re: Simplicity
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:22:49 PM AEST
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Nice write archie honest and yes, with simplicity, that says it best, whish u well . . .
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Re: Simplicity
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by mylady on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:53:40 PM AEST
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| It sad.. i understand ..good luck.. poem was nice.. |
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Re: Simplicity
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by Anne-ish on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 06:55:52 PM AEST
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The words are so wistful and sincere.
Lots of people feel like you do, Archie. I've been there. Trust in God - sounds crazy, but wait and see...soon you'll be writing poems of joy. I'll be waiting for that day, since you're a gifted writer. |
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Re: Simplicity
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:19:08 PM AEST
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Been there Archie.
You will find happiness once again in your life. This is just a phrase you are going through.
Please write more of your wonderful poetry it helps to release what you feel.
Take care of you
Be patient things will be sure to get better for you
Love Angelxxxxx |
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Re: Simplicity
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:20:31 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings... archie, years ago i felt like this everyday, so i moved to the mountains, life is much more peaceful, and i love those rainbows... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Simplicity
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 01:27:36 PM AEST
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I guess it has to be found in our minds before we can find it in our lives. This is so heartfelt and something (yes indeed, more than just you!) so many people struggle with, including myself. My wish for you is that you find it.
Nice work. J. |
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Re: Simplicity
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:55:56 AM AEST
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Just a thought that came to mind while reading this. If we were happyu all the time, would we not then cease to be? We humans are never capable of knowing the value of tteh divine, and for that, I think, God takes away for a time that which is good, so we can see how good it was. Just a thought, a work in progress.
I apologize. In no way did I mean to take so long. May happiness be returned to you soon.
Take care,
David |
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