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Use me, Abuse me
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:27:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I hear the knife calling in shout
“Use me, abuse me”
I cannot resist the urge to cave
“Use me, abuse me”
Further more I am in doubt
“Use me, abuse me”
No more is the strength I gave
“Use me, abuse me”
Forgetting my promise that I vowed
“Use me, abuse me”
Light is covered by endless dark
“Use me, abuse me”
Portrayal of cynical visions now
“Use me, abuse me”
Strength is the soul but not the heart
“Use me, abuse me”
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Re: Use me, Abuse me
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by sride686 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:44:38 AM AEST
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| This piece makes way to much sense to me but maybe that’s just the dark place my life is at right now. This was a much enjoyed and emotional piece and I thank you for sharing it. Life is hard and full of so much pain but event as dark as it seems and as dark as some of my writes get we will make it through if we look to Him for strength. Take care….Steve |
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Re: Use me, Abuse me
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by Jaycee on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 04:15:50 PM AEST
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| Ha! You usually write poems that spoon feed us, so when we have to think... owww, my head hurts. I get the overall feeling of the poem, but call me stupid, but I am not exactly sure of it completely making sense. There is enough mystery, I guess, that leaves it to interpretation. Or maybe that's what you intended? |
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Re: Use me, Abuse me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 06:47:00 PM AEST
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it does make sense, i liked it, and i understood. if anybody doesnt get it the first time, read it over again and you'll get it.
-Courtney
~XOXO~
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Re: Use me, Abuse me
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:00:17 PM AEST
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yes, it made sense. ughh.... jennie, what can we do about you? i think you and i need to get this notebook and FILL it with anger. we could include kc too. think about it. don't give up on me, i'm still here, remember, we die alone together.
~sprints |
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