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Scared
Contributed by
Moon_kitten05_07
on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:33:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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this is my first entry!
setting here alone,
listening to the rain fall down,
and listening to them fight
i know that it will never
end,but she would never
leave him, so someone
had to go. It was a night
that everyone
could remeber
i took my own life
she and him could have
seen that it wa coming
many people told her
that she should have
lefted him, before he kills
her, but she would never
listen. After that her
life was not normal
anymore her little girl
is now gone
now she relized that
she should have left him
they keep asking their self
why lord?
why did she do it?
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Moon_kitten05_07
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2005-04-29 09:33:47]
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Re: Scared
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:30:10 AM AEST
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a little confusing but still a great poem for a first. continue to write and expand your talent. ill keep reading,
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: Scared
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by Concrete_Rose on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 09:48:00 AM AEST
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| i truly feel for this *write* my parents divorced when i was very young but i learn to accept that everyone makes mistakes, but im trying my best not to make the same twice, great job |
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