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Into the Grave of Tomorrow
Contributed by
In_A_While
on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:12:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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_____________________
This boiling disdain
for the weather and rain...
keeps me here in my hole
My needles are bleeding
my thoughts are receding...
nothing is brightening soul
______________________
The candles do flicker
my shadow shakes quicker...
something remains in the rain
The trees are all black
and bubbles look back...
to memories of childhood pain
______________________
I'm born of the drug
and dying for the love...
i'm fetus that twitches to sound
The blood in my soul
is damp in this hole...
nothing prepares me for ground.
And so, into the grave of tomorrow...
Copyright ©
In_A_While
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2005-04-29 09:12:55]
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Re: Into the Grave of Tomorrow
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by sride686 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:44:58 AM AEST
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| This is a good write it just took me a few reads to understand everything in it. It is dark but there is truth in it. Keep writing I look forward to more of your work. I’ll read more of your work right now. Take care....Steve |
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Re: Into the Grave of Tomorrow
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by Willofree on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:39:33 AM AEST
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Very powerful read, apparently dealing with drug use and related consequences. emotionally it feels very lonely and dark.
Well done
Will |
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Re: Into the Grave of Tomorrow
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by Kiira on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:57:34 AM AEST
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This is very deep and descriptive....I love it!
Thanks so much for commenting on my poem....I'm new to this site and need all the help I can get!
~Kiira~ |
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Re: Into the Grave of Tomorrow
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:14:28 AM AEST
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