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A dance to say googbye
Contributed by
thewix
on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 07:56:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Step in to my world
let me take your hand
so i can guide you
trought the world of my thougts
let me take your other hand
so we can make a little dance
can you show the world me
and let me understand
I'm lost in your eyes
desparet for a kiss
on this wonderfull night
the night that I die
So shall we make one more dance
A dance we won't forget
Shall I guide you one more time
goodbye my dear goodbye
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thewix
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2005-04-29 07:56:28]
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Re: A dance to say googbye
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kyarn on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 08:50:57 AM AEST
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| This one I like quite a bit. Good ending, but the whole thing is pretty good too. Nice job. |
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Re: A dance to say googbye
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by miss_jules on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 02:11:20 PM AEST
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| Sad and beautiful. |
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