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Love
Contributed by
footballfan385
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Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 01:41:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Legs shaking when I think of you I’m
On a cloud yet
Vortexing downward into
Eternal happiness
Copyright ©
footballfan385
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2005-04-29 01:41:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by In_a_while on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:50:23 AM AEST (User
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Heeey, that was pretty cool. A breath of fresh air into poetic structure. Very true how love can do that to someone too. keep up the nice work! |
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Re: Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by footballfan385 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:39:23 PM AEST (User
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I was like wow is actually what i meant in the comment aboce my poem just so you don't think i;m crazy and can't finish sentences
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