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apathy
Contributed by
notwhatitseems
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Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:42:48 AM in AEST
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with no hell there is no heaven
with no death there is no life
violent times beautiful memories
don't smile when your sad
kill when it's time to love
if everyone gave up
i want to exist in heaven
i want to be alive
i experience beauty
we all experience sadness
love when it's time to kill
i would never have written a single word
next time you see me sleeping in the street
please say hello to me
apathy
it's my greatest enemy
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Re: apathy
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by Bugoron on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:39:14 PM AEST
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The ending hits you hard, I commend you on this piece :)
Come check out my stuff sometime |
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Re: apathy
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by Archie on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 01:10:14 AM AEST
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| This must have been hard to write. You did a good job. |
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