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Complete with Love
Contributed by
sride686
on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 11:16:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I look at you and I can not speak
As I look in your eyes my knees get week
I知 lost in your eyes that are filled with your love
I need this love that痴 sent from above
For never has a love like you
ever shown me a love this true
So now I知 lost in time
Suspended in these emotions of mine
For are love is divine and are love is so true
For I知 lost in my mind when I知 thinking of you
For when I知 with you the whole world could cease
And I would die in a life full of piece
Copyright ﾂｩ
sride686
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2005-04-28 23:16:21]
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Re: Complete with Love
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 11:43:14 PM AEST
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A great masterpeice.
think I'll get me one of them, (true luv).
heavenly write.
huggs,
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Complete with Love
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by GurlyTye on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 11:45:48 PM AEST
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| It's good to read something more along the happy side.. just as wonderfully passionate as your other poems.. i love it steve. stay strong in love and life. |
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Re: Complete with Love
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by mannyrich on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:11:43 AM AEST
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| You are really an outstanding writer!!!! |
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Re: Complete with Love
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:52:52 AM AEST
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awww outstanding and beautiful write.
well done. |
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Re: Complete with Love
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:59:36 AM AEST
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Lovely poem with true sentiment from the
heart nicely done . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Complete with Love
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 02:57:06 AM AEST
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Heavenly divine Steve. A refreshing breath taking piece of poetry. Glad to see u sharing the happy poems darls. Keep it up. A truly talented writer u r dearest Steve. Always a delight to read ur fabulous work.
Hugs,
~sue~
PS Hope all is well with u dear friend. |
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Re: Complete with Love
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:14:58 AM AEST
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| Very charming poem, i liked it alot. I especially like the talent you have to rhyme, it's very refreshing. Love is positively glowing with your work, keep it up dw |
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