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My only Dream
Contributed by
mannyrich
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Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 11:06:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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After long story of romance
and sharing sweet memories
After the unending happiness
love story ends with heavy hearts
Thanks for the lovely letters
that I read every now and then
thanks for the wonderful experience
that I thought a perfect fairy tale
I have done well my part...
I have given all I can
But I think it is not enough
for you still look for other's hug
If his kisses are warmer than mine
and he gives more romantic letters,
even painful, I will give you to him
because your happiness is my only dream
Copyright ©
mannyrich
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2005-04-28 23:06:44]
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Re: My only Dream
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by jmpy84 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 11:10:18 PM AEST
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| very touching well written |
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Re: My only Dream
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by Thewix on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:15:19 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. Nice expressing of feelings |
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Re: My only Dream
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by sride686 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:06:52 AM AEST
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| This was a great write about the loss of love and I feel the pain in each word of this write. I can relate to this piece its what most of my writes have been about as well. Take care and keep writing….Steve |
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Re: My only Dream
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by Mangs on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 01:19:45 PM AEST
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deeply heartfelt....its not easy to give up the one thing in the world that you want the most....takes real courage...
Love,
Umang |
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Re: My only Dream
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 06:38:31 PM AEST
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| That's such a sweet poem, words can't describe it! I can tell you still think of her often... but wishing her happiness is the most wonderful thing a girl would want from her man. Great emotion with the words. You could probably rhyme them more, but still it's very easy for me to understand. Jenny |
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Re: My only Dream
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by Kiira on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 04:19:06 PM AEST
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You are obviously a sweet and thoughtful person. You are the bigger person in this relationship because you actually care about the other person's feelings even if it makes you unhappy. Great write.
~Kiira~ |
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