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i'm the....
Contributed by
visualizing_life
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Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:22:32 PM in AEST
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im the girl,
in the corner,
in the dark,
all alone
im the one,
whos standing in front of you,
screaming,
but you dont hear me
im the stranger,
searching,
for a friend,
to confide in
im the person,
who gave up
on life,
wen everybody gave up on her
im the student,
whos "depressed"
and "optimistic"
and "crazy"
im a friend,
afraid of sharing
my fears
past and present
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visualizing_life
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2005-04-28 22:22:32]
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Re: i'm the....
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by tractorbabe on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:29:31 PM AEST
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| this is really good i love it |
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Re: i'm the....
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by jmpy84 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 11:03:22 PM AEST
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| wll written you get the point across good job |
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Re: i'm the....
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by death_not_be_feared on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 01:38:16 AM AEST
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| good write |
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