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A World Consumed in World Peace

Contributed by footballfan385 on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:03:38 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

There once was a man who wished for world peace
Sick of all the wars, he wanted it all to cease
His wish somehow ascended into the Heavens above
Next morning he woke with a heart full of love
This new world contained no wars, no problems, no need for police

He turned on his TV in search of morning news
But news stations had gone bankrupt and he was watching an infomercial with someone named Sue
He was upset and he never stopped smiling
He then realized something was missing as happy phone calls from neighbors started piling
Something was different and somehow he always did something without thinking of what to do

Everyday from then on was the same happy stuff
No fighting, no sinning, no frowns, nothing rough
Just a society that did what it did without thinking beforehand of what to do
A society transfixed, always smiling, never really waking from the rooster cockadoodledoo
But they still had world peace, which was good, because wars are tough

Copyright Â© footballfan385 ... [ 2005-04-28 22:03:38]
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Re: A World Consumed in World Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by footballfan385 on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:18:41 PM AEST
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Hey, i recieved some help on this, thank you to those who have helped me, and I've changed the last line of the poem to "Now that man’s wish of world peace put him in a spell, even worse off, oddly enough"

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