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God, here is my soul
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:51:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Here is my soul God I don’t want it anymore
I’m giving it back to you for living I do abhor
I’ll cut myself and I won’t even cry or scream
For I love the pain and from blood satisfaction I gleam
Why did you create me I am such a horrible person?
I experience no joy the dark forces have struck me and won
I’m careless and don’t appreciate the gift of life to be frank
Falling deep beneath the surface and my hopes have further sank
My hearts too battered it cannot function for it is bruised
I will gladly give it back for it is worthless and cannot be used
I’m too much hassle so here is my soul oh Father
Spare me from this sadness to rest in death I would rather.
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-04-28 21:51:12]
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Re: God, here is my soul
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by kitty_express2001 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:56:52 PM AEST
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| Your poem was well written... keep up the nice work!! |
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Re: God, here is my soul
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by blue_angel on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:07:29 PM AEST
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amazing poem... feel like this everyday of this cursed life of mine... i hope we can all find the reason to live and will make it through each day more happy than the last
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: God, here is my soul
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:09:36 PM AEST
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Wow! very touching, moving, write.
Well anyone that can write like u should stick around and live to write. Spit the depression right in Satan's face and write, write, write and write some more.
Your writing is remarkable.
Such an amazing talent u have, flow with it.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: God, here is my soul
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:55:34 AM AEST
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| wow |
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Re: God, here is my soul
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 03:28:31 AM AEST
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This is an outstanding poem which strikes the reader straight at the heart. My friend u have such a talent in writing. Ure not worthless u r a treasure who writes so well. Your writing is absolutely awesome Rach. You rock girl.
Hugs,
~sue~
PS need a friend pm me ok |
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