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Hidden Truth
Contributed by
GregoryGreen04
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Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:45:13 PM in AEST
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I' m just a simple man
Without any elaborate plan
To go to the places I ought to go
And show the world what they ought to know
But I can fool the best of those who see
The facade I set up, that they may think its me
Under the smiles and the grins on the outside
That I flash to so many, the truth to hide
Of a man who knows nothing
And is dying inside
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GregoryGreen04
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2005-04-28 21:45:13]
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Re: Hidden Truth
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by kitty_express2001 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:48:19 PM AEST
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| very good!! |
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Re: Hidden Truth
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:04:31 PM AEST
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abosolutely brilliant poetry. oh i love it and this is the way i feel every day! im smiling on the outside but yes like u i feel as if im dying
jus brilliant i can SOOO much
every word fitted so well, great |
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Re: Hidden Truth
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by stinger on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 05:06:44 PM AEST
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| great poem! not one person in the world has not felt this way at one time or onother, we let people see what they want to see for fear of revealing who we truly are, it's a scary thing but if you realy trust someone that facade can easily be brought down, kinda like the berlin wall, who would of thunk it !!!!! |
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