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Holy Matrimony
Contributed by
Willofree
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Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 07:37:25 PM in AEST
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I caught a glimpse of a potential partner of mine
Seems to be an attraction of some kind
Keep running into each other
Soon after, a desire to date they discover
The look and energy that stirred within
Caused their hearts to flutter, and a tear in spite of their grin
Eyes would lock, followed by a loving smile, then,
A shiver, depicting the degree of love encompassing them
Their togetherness kindled a deep passion and desire
Yet something deeper was inspired
Akin to a relationship like Heaven on earth
Their faith seemed to magnify and give birth
A bond of trust and respect was born
A deep friendship, along with their love was formed
For the covenant of their faith was shared
With a devotion to have Christ inherently there
When they embrace and touch a flame of love does flare
Their eyes reflect the soul of one another to share
Actually deepening the amount of love God would create
And the promise of total fulfillment is reaffirmed, to mate
With love and devotion marriage enters in
A Holy union of commitment begins
And a promise and desire "until death do us part"
This becomes the sacred covenant of the heart
And with the consummation of their love affirmed
Their married journey is set in motion to confirm
A future promise of love and devotion
Forsaking all others with heart helt emotion
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-04-28 19:37:25]
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Re: Holy Matrimony
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:19:26 PM AEST
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you are quite brilliant with your endings, and that is definantly a good thing. your piece started off quite well and ended superbly. this was very nice, "When they embrace and touch a flame of love does flare
Their eyes reflect the soul of one another to share" |
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Re: Holy Matrimony
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 12:48:05 AM AEST
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beautiful and lovingly written, my best to them:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Holy Matrimony
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 06:23:27 PM AEST
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A beautiful write i'm sure your niece will be proud.
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Re: Holy Matrimony
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:41:31 PM AEST
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What a beautiful and endearing tribute to your niece!! I'll bet she loved this...Did you read it at their wedding? This is lovely Will...well done.
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