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Reddemption is COLD!

Contributed by disenchanted_poet on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:11:35 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Burned in the image of my everlasting torment
scarred my flesh
Murderer staked my heart
I'm better off dead than believing
That you could keep
Or want so blindly
A twisted mind
Trapped in a needled body

I keep these etchings on my wall
To remind me what you've taken
Left me adrift for endless days
In a sea of my past addictions
Would you fix your image
In the reflection of my polished casket?
Or shed a single tear for a hopeless life ended abrubtly?

I screamed upon deaf ears
It didn't matter
Drained white from empty words
Carved in the heart you shattered
YOU FAILED ME!

Killer
Murderer
Deny me of closure
These scars wont heal over
Rusted frames
All I had
Pictures of what was
I give to the flames
Watch you BURN
Pick up your pieces and burn them all again
The smoldering ash
Embers of the past!

Shadows unearthed your truest form
The heights of filth astound me
I cleansed myself of whats not real
I'd die just to pull you from me

Consumed inside
Corroded spirit
Words sear my flesh
Spit from the tongues of liars

Stretch my skin
Constricted breath
Face down in your world of mirrors

The night wore on
In time I saw the sun
Familure voice elusive

Everything you said rang hollow
We've read this story once
The end - A toppled Kingdom
I'll tell another truth and youll lie to me

I am not afraid to die
I'm just barley breathing
Crushed brittle bones to dust
When will I head the lessons?

Hell is full
So you're condemed to walk the earth
Face down in your world of mirrors!

Copyright © disenchanted_poet ... [ 2005-04-28 18:11:35]
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Re: Reddemption is COLD! (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:53:18 PM AEST
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"Killer
Murderer
Deny me of closure
These scars wont heal over
Rusted frames
All I had
Pictures of what was
I give to the flames
Watch you BURN
Pick up your pieces and burn them all again
The smoldering ash
Embers of the past!"

My favorite Stanza.. I know this is an old one, but just happened to stumble on to it. I love it. Keep up the work...

MaJ

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