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Books
Contributed by
Anne-ish
on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 05:54:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Being myself, I
Opened
One - the
Key to
Something marvelous
Bring me words
Other-people-
Owned
Kill the banality of
Sixth period.
Copyright ©
Anne-ish
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2005-04-28 17:54:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Books
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:47:04 PM AEST (User
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So great for such a short poem! The word "banality" is just set off by the normalcy of the rest of the poem. If you can do this good with a short poem, I'd like to see what you do in longer works. So cool!
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Re: Books
(User Rating: 1 ) by needledancing on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 08:21:21 AM AEST (User
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A good piece and I would like to yes see a longer one as well. |
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Re: Books
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 11:43:37 AM AEST (User
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I have to agree, your brilliant choice of the word 'banality',
really adds that extra texture to a simple, yet lovely write!
Star x x x |
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