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Destined to be Alone
Contributed by
battousai287
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Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:51:21 PM in AEST
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In a world so cold
Where you don’t seem to exist
Where people walk right past you
Not even seeing who you are
People never talk to you
They rarely even look at you
They have no real interest in you
No one will ever take away your pain
You go on living everyday
Trying to talk to your "friends"
They say good things about you
But what do they really think
You approach your friends
And try to talk to them
But they just go to other people
Leaving you alone again
You try to build your friendship
But only break it
You try to fix the damage
Only making it more fragile
The one you love
You find out hates you
All those years
Must have been lies
You hide all your pain
Putting up fake facades
You keep your feelings bottled up
Destined to be alone
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Re: Destined to be Alone
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:55:05 PM AEST
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I am feeling this way right now, as I have just lost my boyfriend of nearly 3 years, a very sad and deep write,
pix xx |
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Re: Destined to be Alone
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by frozensuicide on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:56:13 PM AEST
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| nice poem, I know the feeling... Not a really great feeling, but a familiar one. If you need any ears to listen to, I have two and their Ear-Wax free! |
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Re: Destined to be Alone
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by ASUNDERCHAZ on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:58:42 PM AEST
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| I LIKE THE WAY YOU WRITE, FROM THE HEART. HOWEVER, DON'T DISPAIR. LIFE COMES IN WAVES, SOON TIME WILL SMOOTH OUT THE HURTS AND ALL WILL ONCE AGAIN FEEL BETTER. THE TRUTH IS, YOU WILL ONLY BE ALONE IF THAT IS WHAT YOU CHOOSE. |
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Re: Destined to be Alone
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by sandysandysandy on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 03:08:56 PM AEST
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| I have been living in a town for 4 yrs now. and you know what. I have not met a person I can talk to. I start to speak and they look at me funny and keep on a walking. I then lift up my arm and smell.. nope that is not it lol lol... but I think people get mean because others have treated them bad and so they don't know how to act differently .. what I tell myself. I loved your poem because many people can relate.... |
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Re: Destined to be Alone
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 04:52:40 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC. A very well expressed and written piece of poetry. Alot of people can relate to it. Hang tuff friend. U r not destined to be alone. Take care.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: Destined to be Alone
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by c0rymm on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:24:26 PM AEST
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Hey man, i hope you don't have to trudge through this ***** much longer, and i have a good feeling you will pull yourself out. I would tell you that God will pull you out, but i can't because i don't believe that's always true. But i'd rather not discuss God now, cause it confuses me. So just hang in there and remember, Life is what you make of it.
I wish you the best of luck in getting the hell out of the *****ty days to come, but that's up to you i suppose.
goodbye for now
- Cory |
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