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Loneliness Has Found Me
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:47:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Loneliness has found me at long last,
It had been lurking around in my past,
Waiting for me to fall deep in love,
Then choke it with its deadly glove.
It once whispered long ago,
But into the distance it did blow,
I thought I would never see it again,
But I have & with it came pain.
I am wrapped up inside its cloak,
I have no-one to blame it is my fault,
I have lost all that I held close,
Chased him away along with the ghosts.
Never will he return into my arms,
As once too often I’ve caused him harm,
My soul is dead & so is my heart,
I have ripped my own love apart.
I will do anything for him to return,
As I can’t take this ferocious burn,
Of pure & solid desperate heartache,
I have lost my love & that’s no mistake.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-04-28 13:47:21]
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Re: Loneliness Has Found Me
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:53:33 PM AEST
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Powerful words in this.
It oozes a deep sense of pain all the way through.
Held my interest from start to finish
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Re: Loneliness Has Found Me
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 02:14:26 PM AEST
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This brings me 2 tears and touches my heart
i am so sorry pix . . . (((((4u)))))
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Re: Loneliness Has Found Me
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by Ravensfire on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 02:57:13 PM AEST
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| Very sad, expressed very well though. |
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Re: Loneliness Has Found Me
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 04:02:25 PM AEST
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Krissie this was just fabuloso. I liked it with its sadness pouring from each word.
Nice write.
Jane~ |
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Re: Loneliness Has Found Me
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 04:45:04 PM AEST
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Aww Krissie I feel ur pain and anguish through ur words. I hope all is well for u. You brought tears to my eyes. Hugs for u dear friend. PM ok darls.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: Loneliness Has Found Me
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 05:12:00 PM AEST
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Good poem there Krissie but you shouldn't
blame yourself for your breakup since he is
just as much to blame as yourself. It takes
two to make a relationship work and it takes
two to destroy it. Just know that in time your
pain will fade.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Loneliness Has Found Me
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by sride686 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 12:03:22 AM AEST
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| This was a very well written and powerful write. It is so sad and it really drew me in and I could feel every word of pain in it. Good work and take care I look forward to more of your powerful writes….Steve |
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Re: Loneliness Has Found Me
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 02:28:10 AM AEST
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Oh Krissie, what a heartfelt poem indeed!
I feel your sadness, your frustration, your need!
Please know how very sorry I am.........is there anything I can do? I wish I could be closer to hold your hand.
Beautiful write with much sadness though
Warm Love and hugs
ConSue |
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Re: Loneliness Has Found Me
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 06:47:46 PM AEST
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| I've felt that common emotion soo often. It always finds me... when I'm alone, I'm vulnerable, it's target... That's a great poem. I can really relate to that. Jenny |
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Re: Loneliness Has Found Me
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:56:11 PM AEST
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your a beautiful person krissie, and in your pain written something so beautiful many can relate to, im sorry for your sadness and wish the sun shine upon you soon.... lotsa big hugs n' love always, nessa
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