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Is Love This Way Walking?
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:28:10 PM in AEST
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Is love this way walking ?
A journey shaped by soft and nervous steps
Like a child learning , so carefully she treads
Unsure of the path beneath her feet
Did she stumble on this road before ?
Crash to her knees, smitten by a storm
Cold winds blew on the love she trusted
Ravaged the union, tore it apart
The heart demands but the mind restrains
One is the bird, the other the earth
A flight of belief, of wishes and dreaming
Snares in the branches, roots it to the ground
The new way ahead is dark and untrodden
No markers to follow and no-one to guide
Succumb to the realm of familiar and safe
Or strike out more boldly, run deep into night?
Now is the time to be free of old wounds
Pour love into the veins, replenish the heart
Let the prison bars before you, fashioned from the fear
Transform to a curtain, a tissue of belief
Banish the old world, too long its memory lingers
Let today be resurrection, the spirit reborn
You are the butterfly, the winter has passed
Summers morn awaits, spread your wings and fly
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Re: Is Love This Way Walking?
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 02:01:32 PM AEST
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I certainly hope love i walking her way. We cannot change anything in the past, but we can make sure the future is brighter. We have to let go of the pain and open up to the happiness that is hopefully ahead.
This is a lovely work for a friend.
Dove |
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Re: Is Love This Way Walking?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:57:19 AM AEST
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| You conjure great images in these words. Love walking toward you as you leave old heartbreak behind. I like the last line..."Summers morn awaits...spread your wings and fly" Something we must all learn to do. Great write! :-) joni |
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Re: Is Love This Way Walking?
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:36:42 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem for your friend.
Love Angelxxxxx |
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Re: Is Love This Way Walking?
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:01:34 PM AEST
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this is beautiful steve, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Is Love This Way Walking?
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by karrie on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 06:02:37 PM AEST
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i love this steve..
you'r friends one lucky person..
karen
xxxx |
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Re: Is Love This Way Walking?
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by rosethorn100 on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 06:19:35 AM AEST
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When i read this poem, i right away knew who you was talking about. a lovely poem to write to a friend and to wish her luck
I also wish her al the luck in the world as I truely treasure this person.
and I know she she truely treasure your friendship too.
beautiful well writting peom as always
keep going
huggggggggs rosey xx |
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