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Laughing Smoke

Contributed by glu1 on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 11:47:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Why, am I put through such torment.
How could she, so beautiful, the light of my world, cause me so much pain?
I writhe in perpetual agony at the thought of being away from her. Every second we are apart drives a thousand razors into my heart.
Such a paradox, it hurts my head to think, i find myself lost for words, this unfarmiliar territory.
Why does she do it to me? What did I ever do to her?
Answer me this, thou worse to me than dead, Why do you see fit, to remove my sight? Why must i stumble, cold and afraid through the darkness?
This is worse, worse than saying 'no' saying 'leave me be' saying 'be gone from my sight', i'll never be free of you and as you go to leave, you drag me with you, obediently through the dirt.
You burn my soul, searing hotter than hellfire, the stench of my flaming heart, acrid and black, with whisps of laughing smoke, fills your head.
I could destroy you, you are no threat to me, i could make you seem stupid in a hundred ways. But I can't.
These chains of love wrap bindingly around my neck, the oculus infernum is scorched into my eyes, and i cannot see, no i cannot see.

RIP, thy love for thee

Do not repent, you cannot see

Alone toghether. In infinity

Copyright © glu1 ... [ 2005-04-28 11:47:00]
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Re: Laughing Smoke (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 01:10:14 PM AEST
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deeply moving, sooo beautiful.... hugs n' love nessa

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