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I hurt in so many ways when your down
Contributed by
tin
on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:55:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm so sorry,
For what i can't do,
You've been feeling so down,
But i don't know how to help you.
I've tried to cheer you up,
But my efforts are in vain,
I know i'm useless to your situation,
And it's driving me insane,
When my day is unbearable,
I could look at your smiling face,
All my problems melt like wax,
And your love paves the way
But you won't tell me how to help,
I just want to see you smile again,
I want to hear you laugh,
To know your happy within.
It makes me sad when your sad,
It hurts worse to see you frown,
I'm not sure how to tell you,
That i hurt in so many ways when your down..
Now there is one thing,
It's all i could think to do,
It doesn't help or make sence,
But now i'm bleeding for you.
So please cheer up,
Please get up off the ground,
Without your love,
This world will beat me down.
Please be happy again,
If not for your self,
Then do it for me.
Copyright ©
tin
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2005-04-28 09:55:18]
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Re: I hurt in so many ways when your down
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 11:34:46 AM AEST
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omg i almost started to cry. Thank you for making me see what the people around me feel like when i am depressed. thank you thank you
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Re: I hurt in so many ways when your down
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by Channing on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 10:55:52 PM AEST
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| Good poem, can definitely tell there some love there, or maybe obsession. |
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