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Demon Inside
Contributed by
justingunshin
on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 02:30:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Standing alone, left in the corner
Prone to loneliness, empty inside
The only one left out, with no given pride
Beating down inside, my sanity
ready to subside, while the anger
tried to confide, seeping from my
veins, my heart trapped in chains
While a creature grew, made the hatred spew
Pulsating through, I tried so hard to subdue
Clenched up fists, While it dug deeper and
tried to persist
The thing within, continued to dig,
while the demon finally released
My body completely deceased
Controlled by the beast,While it came forth
ready to take it's feast.
Copyright ©
justingunshin
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2005-04-28 02:30:33]
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Re: Demon Inside
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 04:52:40 AM AEST
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wow thats a very dark dark poem.
You did really really well on this one.
awsome. |
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Re: Demon Inside
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:13:57 AM AEST
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This was certainly haunting, very well writen Justin.
I enjoyed this dark write.
Jane~ |
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Re: Demon Inside
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:18:54 AM AEST
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whoo-hoo! great poem with such a great meaning behind it
well done, a masterpiece |
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Re: Demon Inside
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:40:40 PM AEST
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I understand you perfectly.Hate can be all consuming if you let it take over.
Good write, I enjoyed reading it......I didn't hate any part !
Steve |
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Re: Demon Inside
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by Kie-Kie on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 04:47:25 PM AEST
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That poem was amazing 8-|
Sure makes me glad that I don't really hate anything. *shudders at the thought*
If I did could you imagine the monster that would be inside me? *hides from self*
Anyways back to the poem... GREAT JOB
5 stars :D
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: Demon Inside
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:00:09 AM AEST
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This is some good shi7.
Welcome to YPDC.
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