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CRUCIAL CHANGES
Contributed by
gina
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Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
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It's true i cried so many nights
Unable to stop, too weak to fight
Obvious is the scar graved in my heart
When you told me it's better being apart
Unexplainable is the pain i felt everyday
As you decided to go each on his way
Pitiful is how i came back and call
To hear you denying between us all
Mean is how my love you reject
Cruel is how easy you forget
***
Hard is how i tried to bring the bliss
Shocked when suddenly i realised this :
Unexpected are the changes i found in me
I'm not the weak person i used to be
Wide are the smiles raised on my face
Weird is how disappeared your trace
Ash is your new apology letter
Loud is when i hear it my laughter
Happy is the girl now in control
Grown up is the child that you recall
Careless and tough,that's how i became
I learned it from the best ,it's you to blame
Weakness point i won't reveal no longer
What didn't kill me made me Stronger
Copyright ©
gina
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2002-12-26 20:00:00]
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Re: CRUCIAL CHANGES
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 04:38:01 AM AEST
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Oh bravo gina!!!! You go get em' girl i think everyone should say "Thank You" to the ones who hurt us becoz without them to hurt us what would we learn and what would make us stronger than before......hehe....this is very inspirational and very deep...thanks for sharing it my friend...
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Re: CRUCIAL CHANGES
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 03:57:41 PM AEST
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| Nice one Gina,i like it so much.I think "stronger thanks to u" is better. |
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Re: CRUCIAL CHANGES
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by Opium on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 07:28:15 AM AEST
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Both titles are good, what you chose is better because it comes from your heart that wrote the poem (ma ba3rif eza fhemte asdeh)
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Re: CRUCIAL CHANGES
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by spooky on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 07:33:25 AM AEST
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| this was great ,,,we learn from the hurt,,sometimes itr takes a little longer but we do,,the one thing they can;t take away is our love,,reguardless of how we feel,,well done,,keepm comin,,spooky |
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Re: CRUCIAL CHANGES
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by spooky on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 07:33:26 AM AEST
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| this was great ,,,we learn from the hurt,,sometimes itr takes a little longer but we do,,the one thing they can;t take away is our love,,reguardless of how we feel,,well done,,keepm comin,,spooky |
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