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MY INSPIRATION
Contributed by
gina
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Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
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Devided i am : half Ice half Fire
The fire didn't work to melt the ice
And the ice couldn't extinguish the fire
Haunted i must be,need to exorcise
Dangerous challenge,certainly dire
But i need to accomplish this exercise
As in the miror my bosy i admire
A spirit from my chest slowly rised
Stole the power, weak im left and tired
Felt weird as a part of me splits and flies
I gazed him,lest i die,mercy i required
By the look in his eyes im hypnotised
My hair was standing on end as i retire
My blue lips uttered :"name the price"
He was leaving for another body to hire
At this moment i felt he's really nice
But before he dived deep in the mire
He smiled and said with no despice :
"I just came for a poem as you i inspire"
Copyright ©
gina
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2002-12-26 19:40:00]
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Re: MY INSPIRATION
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 04:34:16 AM AEST
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Wow gina this is beautifully written, thanks for sharing this one, it's nice to see that you have inspiration in your life that you can look up to....i think that many people don't have this....Keep em' coming girl i enjoy reading your poetry...
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Re: MY INSPIRATION
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by Opium on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 07:40:42 AM AEST
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To be honest, (bass akid mish bel engliseh, ma 7abbet hal poem :P)
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Re: MY INSPIRATION
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by thorns on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 02:19:11 PM AEST
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| weird (but i guess you knew that). i think most of us stuggle with parts of our personality--I do. |
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Re: MY INSPIRATION
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by spooky on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 07:37:27 AM AEST
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| theres two sides to everyone a good side and a bad side,,thats life as we know of it,,we strive to make things right wheather its good or bad we still want the best ,,well written ,,,keepm comin,,,spooky |
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Re: MY INSPIRATION
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by zeppchic420 on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 11:56:50 AM AEST
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| This is great....i like your style....thanks for the comment on all because of you... |
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