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Contributed by
juves_angel
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Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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more fighting
more screaming
more pain
more bleeding
what comes next?
should i run?
or get the gun?
should i stay?
will i pay?
all i kno is
i cant take this another day
in the dark
all alone
can i really find a new home?
all these tears
through the years
may one day help me face my fears
no one to turn to
no one who cares
for now i stay
ill put on a fake smile
itll be alright
in a little while
oh god
why me?
why all this misery?
why am i the one with all this pain to go through in my long journey?
i want to go
i want to run
why cant i be the one with all the fun?
i really wanna go
i really wanna die
i want to be where i can spread my wings and fly
take me lord
take me now
no one here
wants me around
no ones sees the pain nor tears
ive seemed to be running strong for 14 long years
i wish i was an angel
flying so high
i want to be soaring
way up in the sky
lord i know you made me
will you please take me back
maybe life wasnt meant for me
all of this pain and suffering i see
i just cant take it
its lasted too long
please forgive me father
for i kno ive been wrong
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juves_angel
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2002-12-26 19:20:00]
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Re: No Title
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 04:30:13 AM AEST
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Im glad you made it through this time in your life and that you've came as far as you have, there's much in life to live for if you just beleive in yourself and trust in your heart....thanks for sharing this one it's truly a sad write but one im glad that your here to write today my friend....
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Re: No Title
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by juves_angel on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 09:54:16 AM AEST
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| AwWw Thankiez =) |
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by wordsy on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 10:03:18 AM AEST
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| Words well woven. A very nice read. I hope that you do not often have these feelings. |
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Re: No Title
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by juves_angel on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 10:25:47 AM AEST
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I don't... Honestly I hope I never get them again...
-Mandy |
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by orgygirl on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 01:06:59 AM AEST
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| These feelings leave you so frightened , scared, hopeless, and you feel alone ,and isolated, this poem takes me back to my sucide days.. Ya gotta be stong you've overcame the worst... the strong desire to want to take your life but you didn't give in, it'll have to get better, can't get any worse right? |
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 04:44:55 PM AEST
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| This is real deep.Very emotional,great write. |
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Re: No Title
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by mandy091706187 on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 10:44:06 PM AEST
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Hey... It's Juves_Angel... I had to make a new SN because I can't get the password to my other one
-Mandy |
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Re: No Title
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by riverofwords on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 07:45:26 AM AEST
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well ..when we are at a very low time in our lives ..or in a very emtional time ..we write from the heart and this poem is from the heart ..i hoped it help yuo through it ...
awesome
peace be your journey
terry
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