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Invisible To You
Contributed by
smiley_jennyxoxo
on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:06:01 PM in AEST
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My heart is in ache
As I ignored you since my wake
You act like I'm invisible
Is forgiveness even possible?
I don't understand your mind
Inside you I want to find
What you truly think of me now
I want us to be friends somehow
Are you willing to gain trust in me?
You've been punishing me awfully
By not understanding my views
I hope you understand that you threw
Your life and my life away too
Now try and tell me something new
And maybe I'll decide to forgive you
Copyright ©
smiley_jennyxoxo
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2005-04-27 23:06:01]
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Re: Invisible To You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:16:03 PM AEST
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great ryhme. i loved the flow
you can feel the emotion put into this write.
excellent write! |
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Re: Invisible To You
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:24:58 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Invisible To You
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 12:28:33 AM AEST
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SWEET & A GOOD GESTURE(4 writing it 4 someone else)! YOU'VE GOT A GREAT WAY OF PUTTING WORDS TOGETHER!! SO KEEP ON SMILING!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Invisible To You
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:35:18 PM AEST
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great write. very nice, too. i feel like i could say this, but to someone who was just a friend. hope it works out. keep up the good write.
~sprinter27 |
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Re: Invisible To You
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:17:27 AM AEST
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| Another very sad and touching poem with so much emotion. Keep writing you put so much of your heart in to your writes. I’ve read a few of your pieces now but I was wondering what’s your favorite or which one you would like to have read and commented on. Take care always….Steve |
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