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The beach
Contributed by
kitty_express2001
on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:06:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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I went to the beach.
to pick a peach .
Then I took a seat.
I found seashells.
Then I had a pounding in my head.
Oh that was the worst headache!
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Re: The beach
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anne-ish on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:35:29 PM AEST (User
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I love it! So simple and fresh. Keep it up! Your style rocks. |
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Re: The beach
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 03:54:21 AM AEST (User
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This was a very cute poem. I like it
very Great write on this poem. It was kind
of short .. But different .. Good Job!! |
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