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tied down
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 08:54:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Tied down...
Ropes burning in...
Reaching out but held back...
Constrained by force
Iron chains I must break
But in time I grow weak
And have shortness of breath
Drowning alive
In this desert of death
Clogging my throat
Sharp stones in my heart
The smell of death
Hangs so near to me now
A wavering mist
Fogging up from the shadows
On its slow attempt
To consume my life whole
It blurs my view
I can’t escape the darkness
Because I’m tied down
Straining at my ropes
Attempts to break free
But the chains are too thick
They’re suffocating me
Copyright ©
spazz911
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2005-04-27 20:54:48]
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Re: tied down
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:08:49 PM AEST
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i will untie you and help you breathe, as long as youre willing to let me help. i cant help if you dont tell me whats wrong... keep that in mind.
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Re: tied down
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 04:25:04 AM AEST
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you have some great analogies, here.
great write! |
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Re: tied down
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:39:58 PM AEST
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right on images, well done:) hugs n' love nessa
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