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im sorry
Contributed by
psycopath
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Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 07:51:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I'm sorry for all the the things i have done
and I beg for forgiveness
most of what I had is gone
but I will never love you less
I have writtin this rhyme
to prove my love for you
and after all this time
I hope you know its true
I dream of our days together
it seems like the skies above
my tears fall like rainy weather
in hopes this poem proves my love...
...I'M SORRY
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psycopath
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2005-04-27 19:51:41]
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Re: im sorry
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 08:06:44 PM AEST
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| It's a good poem, but I think it's a little too much like every other love poem. |
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Re: im sorry
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by Baby_Grl on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:36:02 PM AEST
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Nice poem. Good one. But heres a question: Hows it true? Its been written through a computer. You gotta go with the expression thats how I know it will be true or not. But nice write hun. bye.
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