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My heart's dream...
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 07:29:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The asters tilt gently
In the meadow of green fair
Swaying to and fro
As the wind blows witout a care
The water cascades
Over the waterfall
Protruding cold droplets
In dense accumalated balls
My heart softly mellows
In watching such bliss
It reminds me
Of your love that I miss
Nightfall blankets the sky
The stars twinkle above
I seek out the shiniest star
For it reminds me of our love
The constellations form together
The way they do every night
Parading beautifully with style
Producing heavenly luminous light
I lay amidst the meadow
Dreaming as I always do
Looking up at the stars
As I passionately think of you...
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mina-1
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Re: My heart's dream...
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 07:35:43 PM AEST
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Very Beautiful write...And I feel the exact same way about the person I love..that recently moved...Very great indeed..
~Clark |
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Re: My heart's dream...
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:09:38 PM AEST
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VERY ROMANTIC & AS PRETTY AS PASSION!
IT BRINGS HAPPINESS TO MY HEART!! IT TOUCHES EACH & EVERY SPARK!!! A GREAT ONE MINA!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: My heart's dream...
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:10:34 PM AEST
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A really beautiful romantic poem. It's so lovely!
Scott |
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Re: My heart's dream...
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by venkat on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 12:39:23 AM AEST
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| Your poems on dreams are filled with beautiful descriptions of nature..romantic :-) venkat |
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Re: My heart's dream...
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by dvsnme816 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 03:52:13 AM AEST
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Sue,
Such compassion and integrity you show in the imagery of your poem. the feelings you show are known by the one you care for... believe me. I find the poem an inspiration, a a strengthener of a ralationship of sorts. you are the vixen of a lovers vow my dear. I hope to hear more from you...
XOXOXO
Alex |
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Re: My heart's dream...
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 07:14:11 AM AEST
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Another beautiful heavenly write. Well done
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: My heart's dream...
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 05:08:48 PM AEST
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A beautiful love poem. Well done.
Andrew |
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Re: My heart's dream...
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:00:00 PM AEST
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| ah, excellent post sue. im glad i read this one. i loved it. i would try and pick out my favorite parts, but there are too many of them... |
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Re: My heart's dream...
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 03:04:54 AM AEST
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tender and beautifully written, you are a pleasure to read:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My heart's dream...
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:27:03 AM AEST
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Full of beauty.
Fantastic write.
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