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perfect
Contributed by
xAegisx
on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 06:46:51 PM in AEST
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if this world was perfect
then i'd have you
if this world was perfect
then no one would care
if this world was perfect
then i could love you and be loved
if this world was perfect
it wouldn't seem like u only used me
if this world was perfect
you would get rid of her
if this world was perfect
then you would come back to me
if this world was perfect
then you'd know how i really feel
if this world was perfect
then you'd know that i love you
if this world was perfect
then you could know that i did what i did
so you would love me too...
but you never loved me
and i doubt you ever will
you say you don't like her
and that you like me more
but yet when i see you and her together
when i hear her say i love you to you
i know the truth
i know that i will never have you
the way i want you
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2005-04-27 18:46:51]
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Re: perfect
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:43:11 PM AEST
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| This is sad, well written, but sad. "if this world was perfect" wouldn't that be wonderful...but since it's not, we gotta take everything in stride. nice job, though the rhythem was lost here and there. |
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Re: perfect
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by crazygirl on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 02:17:08 PM AEST
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| im not gonna lie im crying now.I've had the exact same emotions, and to be honest i still do. This was thee best poem, i've ever read honestly. I really love the way you put your words; in all of your poems. Truly wonderfull |
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