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Closer And Farther
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 04:13:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I close my eyes,
I can see out,
Unrestrained,
Into the vastness of space.
But it means nothing,
When I know,
That when I open my eyes,
You will not be there by my side.
I can never touch the stars,
But I can hold you close.
We are all connected,
We are all made from the stars.
When we embrace,
We embrace the cosmos.
Lets become closer to the stars,
Tonight,
Then we ever dreamed possible.
Take my hand,
We will travel into the starlight,
And in this moment,
I know everything will be alright.
I can never touch the stars,
But I can hold you close.
We are all connected,
We are all made from the stars.
When we embrace,
We embrace the cosmos.
Take my hand,
We will travel into the starlight,
And in this moment,
I know everything will be alright.
Lets become closer to the stars,
Tonight,
Then we ever dreamed possible.............................
A flash
Blinding
An explosion
Deafening
Radioactive Decay
Supernova
Black Hole
Big Crunch
Time disintegrates and Existence vanishes.
And I am all that is left remaining
Alone.
Now I see,
That like the stars
From which we see their light,
You are long gone.
My memories
Like the starlight that has traveled far
Through empty space
To pass through my empty eyes
Has long been wandering alone
In silence
Separated from their founding source.
When I close my eyes,
I can see out,
Unrestrained,
Into the vastness of space.
But it means nothing,
When I know,
That when I open my eyes,
You will not be there by my side.
Copyright ©
Onslaught
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2005-04-27 16:13:06]
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Re: Closer And Farther
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 04:41:48 PM AEST
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An amazing poem! I loved it. Great imagery and flow. The words held my attention and made me happy, then sad. Great write! Just remember, we may lose loved ones; but there are always more that need to be loved.
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Re: Closer And Farther
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:41:54 AM AEST
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Mike, im so sorry about this.
This was such an emotive write, making me feel all the pain behind your haunting words.
Jane~ |
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