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red angel
Contributed by
karmen
on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 12:17:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Angel,
covered in blood,
all her own.
Coming from the horrible cuts,
all over her lifeless body.
Follow her crimson red footsteps,
in the white glistening snow.
She's dressed in red,
and preparing for her death.
Walking along on the snowy path,
she comes to a stop,
and slowy falls to the ground.
This is her death bed.
Beautiful images of snowflakes fall,
easing her consuming fear of death.
One tear gently glides,
across her frozen cheek.
Now shaking,
because of the bitter cold air,
but numb to the pain,
overtaking her fragile self.
Shes slowly but most defintely,
is slipping away from this earth.
Copyright ©
karmen
... [
2005-04-27 12:17:41]
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Re: red angel
(User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 12:24:58 PM AEST
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| Wow it sad and scary at the same time.. nice |
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Re: red angel
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by Kiira on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 04:36:22 PM AEST
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I like!! Thanks for commenting on my poem.....i'm new to this site...but anyway i like this poem.
~Kiira~ |
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