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Crying
Contributed by
sweetncaring
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Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:56:36 AM in AEST
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FamilyPoems
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Sitting here crying
wondering what to do
I have a good life to a point
but that point ends with you
holding to tight to that little girl you used to know
letting go will be the hardest part
I have my own life
I wish you could see
I don't want to be a little girl anymore
I just want to be the woman I am ment to be
you taught me well through out my life
now let go
so I can learn somethings myself
crying ever day
wondering what life will bring
when you finally let me be.
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sweetncaring
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2005-04-27 10:56:36]
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Re: Crying
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by mylady on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 12:20:22 PM AEST
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nice ...As a older lady i still want to be there little girl but i was to busy wanting to learn
now my father passway i wish i was there to see
them grow old.take you time you will learn many thing.. good luck... |
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Re: Crying
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 04:31:35 PM AEST
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A classic of a poem oh the emotions u stir up
u write do delicately verry nice . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Crying
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by kitty_express2001 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:05:27 PM AEST
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| This was a very sad write... but good:) |
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