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Time
Contributed by
Wicked_Poet_Akasha
on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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now is the time for me to rise to my feet
wipe your spit from my face
wipe these tears from my eyes
i've got to take my life back
one chance to make it right
i've got to have my voice be heard
and bring meaning to this life
cuz i'm trusted for nothing
i've been led astray
i've been tried and tested
but i won't accept this fate
i've done things i regret
and now it's time to reverse the roles
now i just wanna make it on
all the promises i have made
Copyright ©
Wicked_Poet_Akasha
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2002-12-26 16:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 04:14:43 PM AEST (User
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Dear Wicked_Poet_Akasha @-<-
Welcome to YPDC, enjoyed your poem, lots of depth behind your words... always good to have a change of heart..
Your writing friend,
Always Nessa |
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Re: Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 02:33:28 AM AEST (User
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This is so beautifully written the way you talk about taking your life back and making things right in your own life, i admire someone who does that...welcome to YPDC my friend i enjoyed reading this write...we all make mistakes in life, and we are the writers of our lives and how our lives go, it's good to see that you are taking charge of your own ....this is a beautiful inspirational write my friend with deep emotion...i look forward to reading more of your poetry...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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