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I can rhyme!
Contributed by
Feldawn
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Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 01:20:25 AM in AEST
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I once would struggle to make a rhyme
But now my efforts are starting to climb
I found this neat gizmo that makes it so nice
It’s fast and it’s easy and very precise
And now I can write of most anything
For birthdays, family, Jesus, or spring
This thing that I have is an interesting book
With many a rhyme right there for a look
I must do my work this will keep me awake
If I am too sleepy I’m going to shake
Goodnight to my poem I’ll see you again
Lord keep me safe through the night, Amen
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Feldawn
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Re: I can rhyme!
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 01:41:37 AM AEST
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Oh My what a beautiful poem and prayer!
Isn't that little gizmo you speak about great!
Before I discovered it, I'd write and berate.
Now I take all the credit for my rhyme
No one knows most of the time! *smiles*
I loved your little poem..........to the point, and ending with a prayer is great!!
Warm Love
LovingCritters
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Re: I can rhyme!
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by kitty_express2001 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:20:20 PM AEST
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| this was a very good write! |
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Re: I can rhyme!
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by heartless_soul on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:21:10 AM AEST
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this is very nice and well writren for an "I can rhyme!" poem, do keep up the good work and I hope to read you sooner rather then later. Be well
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