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Open Your Eyes

Contributed by Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP) on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Open your pretty eyes and look around my precious lass
See with me, the jolly green of the soft and wide seas of grass
Walk with me side by side, to find new gardens to grow
Let me be by your side, and so I won’t have to fear any sorrow
Let’s look upward and stare at the clear blue of the sky above
See across the heavens the graceful fly of the whitest dove
Feel the warm of the sun as it walks throughout the world
Glance inside my own heart and find that is not that cold
When I feel the touch of your silky soft hand around mine
When you are around I feel drowsy as if I had drank wine
Open your eyes and see that not everything is dark in my life
Though all this time my heart was wounded by a great strife
When I am with you, everything seems to be just too fine
My lady, that’s why my soul for all time will be thine,
Never had I seen a light so bright as the one that in your eyes shine
My pretty lady you are as beautiful as the vision of an angel
As the stars in a silent night, as the wind that blows so joyful
As the deep of the wide sea which looms so wonderful
As the warmth of the solar beams that brings about the spring
As the scent of many stunning flowers in a cold morning
As the twinkle so mirthful of clear and pure water in a fountain
As the shimmers of the sun on the top of the tallest mountain
As the red painted horizon when the day turns to night
Never in my whole life had I been this sure, but I am right
Every time I say that I love you as I never had love anyone
That is why I want to tell you how I feel, before you have gone
Hope in me had died a long time ago, but in you I find strength
Too keep walking in this life until I had ended all its length
Open your eyes and allow me to be lost in their great beauty
Open your eyes and with their kindness free me from guilty
Open your eyes so I can glance inside you gentle and pure soul
Open your eyes, and cleanse from my heart all that is foul
Lets see what tomorrow has in store for us, lets see our fate
Come with me, for my time is short, come with me before is to late
Let me burn forever in the flames of your heart and let me blaze
Let me in your arms forever be, covered in your love’s haze
Let me be by your side all time, until eternity take us away




Copyright © Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP) ... [ 2002-12-26 00:00:00]
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Re: Open Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by DistortedSuicide on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 12:44:16 PM AEST
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I wished someone felt that way about me. This poem was very touching and I liked it alot.


Re: Open Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 01:51:26 AM AEST
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Wow what passion did this woman give to you to write so beautifully...this is so very beautiful, i hope she see's this it will surely take her entire breath away...ah....this is a masterpiece within itself and the visions you give here are breathtaking....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it tremendously...i look forward to reading more of your poetry ...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.




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